Continue on with everything,

Try and keep up,

For life is like a bullet train,

One that never stops.

Depressing as it is,

That is how it will always be so we all must survive and



11 thoughts on “Continue

  1. I like the honesty in this… although i must say as challenging and as depressing as life can be sometimes, look for the things that are lovely, true, pure, and good… they will bring cheer.

  2. i like the use of the word “continue” at the beginning and end of the poem, like a loop. but, life like a bullet train? isn’t it a bit too fast ? but maybe it’s correct too, sometimes life’s so hectic it feels like a runaway train. 🙂

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