Open the door,
What is inside?
A jumble,
A mess,
A untidy sight.
Cleaning is a new word,
To the fixer-upper at my feet,
What should happen first,
The walls,
The floor,
All must be ripped.
Tear away,
Take down,
The canvas widens,
A naked room.
Subject to change.
I love the possibility at the end. This room can be anything you need it to be, now.
Loved your take on the prompt! I agree with moondustwriter. It’s interesting to see how each writer uses the 3 words.
I really like your take on the theme!
and what will the room be once it is done? great take on the prompt
Well done! I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I love the phrase ‘naked room’.
so many ways to interpret this. . . i loved contemplating it.
kinda fun to see how different people are using the three words.
This one reminded me how I feel – alot
I love that you see change in jumble wonderful poem
This is lovely.
just take it one step at a time…no need to rush the art…smiles.