Running around inside a ball of energy,

Pushing through the barriers that have been built,

You begin to see the light,

However there seems to be no end in sight,

Yet, you keep on moving on.

Slowing breaking the egg of life.


10 thoughts on “Push

  1. Great use of suggestion and imagery. Energy contained ready to burst through into light… can really stand for many ideas. Well done

  2. Stopping by to join this challenge. I was in withdraw after the A-Z in April. LOL

    I’ll be back to post my work.

    This poem I thought was about a hamster ball but … maybe I’ll write about the hamster ball.


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