Overwhelming need,
Love is this indeed,
Whirlwind night,
I can have one more right?
Loopsy lines like telephone cables,
I would stand up if I was able.
Swirling rooms create a vertigo,
Where is the vortex that will transport me home?
Overwhelming need,
Love is this indeed,
Whirlwind night,
I can have one more right?
Loopsy lines like telephone cables,
I would stand up if I was able.
Swirling rooms create a vertigo,
Where is the vortex that will transport me home?
Verse in a Nutshell 
love it,
perfect wording,
divine sentiments.
🙂
beautifully expressed 😀 the tipsy feeling came out on the dot!
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Nailed that drunk feeling with your verses. Good stuff.
A tipsy evening, it seems… 🙂
Very witty! I loved, “Where is the vortex that will transport me home?” Oh, that’ll give you vertigo, too! Kow the feeling! Good magpie!
Great writing!
physics of it all
Reminded me of sci-fi – wormholes et al!
Do I fee the room spinning?
Yay! Been there too! But ooh the next morning!
Anna :o]
Ah yes, so often just one more… loopsy lines indeed.
Loopsy lines – love it! This is a great piece!
Just one more can’t hurt…swirling rooms…oh yes, I remember…sort of. This was very good. vb
I can have one more right… is probably the ruination of us all, great take on prompt.
loved the loopsy lines!
Ah, yes. Been there a few times!
Beautifully written Magpie!!!!
great magpie! love the line, ‘loopsy lines like telephone cables’
Ahh… one more. Great piece!
This is fantastic, I love this!
in vino ergo wooziness for me too.
Been there – nice poem!
it is so tempting, isn’t it?